Zealot (MVC)
The statues have eyes; never a blink, always watching. Stone cold was their justice, even in the warmth of candle light dances. First the savor of sage, but silence in reply. Gray gazes and nothing I...
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Quote:I can only think their needs are of human design, as I place the orbs in the offering dish and see them smile in my mind.[/quote] I love your ending verses, Traci...the entire poem is sublimely...
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Awesome !! So creative scenery, quite a short movie ! Good luck for the challenge._________________________________________________
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I can only think their needs are of human design, as I place the orbs in the offering dish and see them smile in my mind. I love the closing lines, Traci. Its short, dark, powerful & very...
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a slice of darkest perfection, spun in hues of deepest thought and meaning. Bravo!
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I love how you managed to twist this pic darkly, dear poetess!! *applause*
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It is sort of an odd transition from orbs in the plate to seeing them smile in the mind... but I got the gist of it. I really liked it. The image of someone so fervent in their quest they would try...
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Oh "sublimely potent". . .I like that, Rick! Don't think I've ever received those honors. Thank you, Mir. I only wrote this because your poem seemed so lonely in the challenge. Mine pales in...
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leave the statues, replacing Kali with Pan, and you HAVE an image from My house..... dark image? Not to Me either, sis.... now.. on to the poem. I couldn't help thinking of a few zealots that this...
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Excelent rendering of the pic Traci. There is that feeling of just being on the edge of what is sanity and what is fanatacism beating here behind this one. As well a a healthy sprinkling of...
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Dee, my sweet sis, and Wolf, thanks for stopping by. Good to see both of you. Glad you enjoyed.
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